>>2
keep writing! i read the first chapter and skimmed a couple more. i think your grammar and sentence structure can be difficult to parse, but writing anything longform is a huge commitment and i have to praise your ambition. keep doing your best (◠‿・)—☆

>>2
Every character in this novel is an asshole. Not in the cool nisioisin way, but the way my melting brain assumed the worst in everyone when I was in high school.
Good shit.